Feedback to our first edit - changes we made in response to this

Today me and Tyra finished our first complete edit. We decided that it would be a good idea to present this first edit to our fellow classmates and to receive feedback, so we can get ideas about how to improve this first edit. The documents below show what our fellow classmates liked about our music video, as well as other things that we can improve on.

By doing this feedback task, it helped us to understand what components of our music video was successful, and also what wasn't so we can therefore make improvements. Overall, we got consistent feedback that the camera shots and the framing was well constructed and at a high standard, and the narrative being capturing and entertaining. However, one issue we did come across more than once is that there was not enough performance shots and that these shots should by synchronised more accurately. Tyra and I took this on board, and soon added more performance shots from previous footage and made sure that all the miming was in sink with the song.